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It was the morning of the concert and they were drinking coffee in a local coffee house down the street from their hotel. They were in the middle of conversation when a gorgeous young lady walked in and they both stopped talking. Each right away thought they must meet her. From very beginning both had ill motivates, they wanted to have her as the trophy girlfriend. Both agree they would pursue her and whoever won her over would be able to date her. Afterwards, Tumburu had managed a cell phone number. But, Narada had scheduled to meet up with her later that night after the concert for the after party. Tumburu in a fit of disarray called their friend Vishnu because Tumburu knew how smooth he was with the ladies. Yet, Vishnu won over ladies attention with his tender care. He truly cherished a woman for more than what she could provided him. Tumburu sought the wrong advice. Vishnu did advice him to help him steal him away from Narada. The plan ended up working Tumburu was extremely surprised.
She ended up with Tumburu at the after party instead of Narada. Once, Narada had learned the schemes of Tumburu he was furious. He then began to hatch a plan to humiliate Tumburu at the dinner party. Narada began his plan but once it was all said and done Vishnu was leaving with her?!? It was Vishnu's plan all along to put them against each other and slide in to show her how a woman should be treated. She was won over with his gentle and caring heart. Vishnu recognized right away that she was an avatar of Lakshmi, his wife. Those other two never stood a chance against him. They would continue to yearn for her but never be worthy suitors.
Author's Note:
I was watching Narayan's Secret and came across this story. Tumburu and Narada are both musicians. They are rival too. Dev talked about how they would go after the same woman. Vishnu would always help them but in a way where he would end up with the woman. She would end up being an avatar of Lakshmi every time. He talked about how Tumburu and Narada yearned after her like a prize to be had. Vishnu would love and adore her. He is the true suitor. I wanted to put a fun modern twist on it. I modeled the feud after Drake and Meek Mill a bit.
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Hello! I really enjoyed reading your story. You had a very unique idea for a story and I think you did a really good job with it. Is this supposed to be your week 13 story? I saw two week 12 stories and I think this one is supposed to be week 13. Overall, great story. The format was great and easy to read. I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteTwitter! Of course the source of so much conflict in the modern world was only outdone by a more ancient source of conflict a lover. It did not help their cases that they only wanted to date her and did not love her. I am so glad at the end of the story that Vishnu was able to show these two men what it means to treat a someone with the respect they deserve.
ReplyDeleteHi Josh! I think this was a really interesting take on the story of Tumburu and Narada, and you added some interesting details to make it a very modern story. I did notice that there were a few grammar/punctuation errors and this did make it a bit harder to read. I think you've got a really good story here, it could just use better proofreading in some spots. Good job!
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